A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her Explain how to apply for the job

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Dear Lu, I hope you find

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letter in good health. I’d like to tell you, that there is an opening which has come up for a travel blogger in a social media firm back in India. As per the job description, it needs a social media intern for their youtube channel, who can help them with video filming and editing. It

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extensive travel through the length and breadth of the country to capture the culture and important festivals. They need professionals who are well versed with Canon 99A

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and have a masters in Filmmaking. As you are already specialized in it and

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have always been fascinated by our country’s culture,

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a perfect mix of work and pleasure. You need to make a short video of your work and send it to the Global Head HR at [email protected]. I hope

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opportunity piques your interest and you decide to move to India for work. Hope to see you soon. Best Regards, Pious

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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