Some people say that prison sentences should be prolonged to reduce crimes. Others say that there are alternative ways to reduce crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

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The argument about

prison

sentences

Suggestion

sentence

duration

happen in every country, different point of views some parties support prolonging sentences and

on the other hand

others suggest reduces sentences.

Neverlethess

, crime will happen due to drugs, money and other reasons.I believe

its

it is

it's

unfair to reduce the

prison

sentences

Suggestion

sentence

duration

First

of all,

poeple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

who get involved in crimes should be punished for a long time since other people are getting hurt and in some cases are getting killed.Even though, some of the prisoners learn and get some education in the

prisons but

Accept comma addition

prisons, but

they still deserve to get the full sentence

duration

Lebanese goverment

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The Lebanese government

Lebanese government

for

example every

Accept comma addition

example, every

4 years they will release prisoners who are not involved in terrorist

activites

any specific behavior

activities

activists

and

thus

statistics shows that 12 percent of these prisoners will come back

for

Suggestion

same or different reason. All in all,

this

proves that

prison

sentences shouldn't be prolonged.

Secondly

, victims and their families experience mental issues due to what they got through.The parties that support reducing the

senctences

Suggestion

sentence

sentences

duration

have to respect the

victims

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victim's

victims'

feelings.In fact, some of the victims families are having

hard time

Suggestion

a hard time

continuing their

lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

lives

life's

life

because they lost the faith in life.

Finally

, judges will be able to decide if

prison

sentences should be

prologned

relatively long in duration; tediously protracted

prolonged

to reduce crimes.

Although

based on what I mentioned in

this

essay show that

its

it is

it's

not effective to reduce the

duration

and it won't reduce crimes.I insist on my

opnion

a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

opinion

that criminals deserve the punishment and

also

victims should be respected.

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Overall Band Score

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247 words

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