In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?
In educational contexts and practical workplaces, some students and colleagues are more hardworking.
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From my perspective, people who put in extra effort might either want to create an edge or simply lack competence. For the first reason, they might have stronger motivation and emulation which drive them to spend more Use synonyms
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on the tasks. With more achievements, they are more likely to have greater opportunities and easier to get promoted, which will benefit their career. For the second reason, some of them with low proficiency might be afraid of falling behind others. Use synonyms
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, staff who had the worst performance have a higher possibility of being dismissed so that they can compensate for their incompetence.
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, the continuous involution in studying and working overtime may bring negative effects. Linking Words
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for relaxing which may lead to stress-related health issues, ignoring work-life balance. Use synonyms
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, some unfortunate workers die of sudden cardiac death after working overnight. Linking Words
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, extra working volume possibly means fewer job vacancies for others, which will trigger a higher quantity of unemployment numbers, Linking Words
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causing a potential financial crisis. Linking Words
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phenomenon is not only against individual interests, but a social issue related to millions of families living.
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