Some people say that the main way to happy in life is to have a lot of money.How might having a lot of money make people happy?what others things in life can make people happy?
A certain number of people believe that the richest
person
is the happiest person
,
whereas others hold a view, that there are Accept space
,
also
others factors which can make people happy. In my opinion,
having Accept space
,
good family
and friendsSuggestion
a good family
,
good environment at Accept space
,
work
place are more important aspects than money
.
it
is irrefutable that Suggestion
It
money
can easily fullfil
all the basics as well as put in effect
fulfil
fulfils
extragavance
needs of a the quality of exceeding the appropriate limits of decorum or probability or truth
extravagance
person
such
as clothes,
big Accept space
,
bunglow
and long car.a small house with a single story
bungalow
Also
, affluent people can send their children to the well reputated
schoolslook on as or consider
reputed
,
which would help them to accelerate the career and have more opportunities in the future.Accept space
,
Moreover
,
they can do the Accept space
,
treatment
of the diseases from the renowned hospitals.For
instance
,
Accept space
,
Indian cricket team player
"Yuvraj Singh" did the Suggestion
an Indian cricket team player
the Indian cricket team player
treatment
of his cancer,
even it was in its Accept space
,
last
stage because he had lot
of Suggestion
lots
money
.
On the other hand
,
if people are having a good familyAccept space
,
,
Accept space
,
then
no other thing of
the world can give them happiness of Suggestion
in
this
kind.In fact,
they do not easily become the victim of the ailments.Accept space
,
For
instance
,
a survey was conducted by an agency inAccept space
,
,
which they found that 70% of people who were suffering from the depression were Accept space
,
belong
to the rich class.
If people have less Suggestion
belonging
belonged
amount
of cash but, they have the good
surroundings as well as Suggestion
the best
work
of their choice at the officesSuggestion
the work
,
Accept space
,
then
it makes them more ecstatic.Many people today are earning enormous
Suggestion
an enormous amount
amount
of money
,
but they are not cheerful with the Accept space
,
work
they are doing at
their offices.Suggestion
in
For
instance
,
Accept space
,
although
the government employees get the high salary
Suggestion
a higher salary
higher salary
the highest salary
the higher salary
,
but they are not satisfied with the Accept space
,
work
in which they are engaged in there
offices.of them or themselves
their
Thatis
why they want to go to Suggestion
That is
private sector
.
To concludeSuggestion
the private sector
,
while it is undeniable that Accept space
,
money
can easily satisfy all the luxury requirements ,
in order to happy others factors Accept space
,
also
matters such
as family and friends,
if a Accept space
,
person
do not have
these Suggestion
does not have
then
the money
is of no use for him.
A certain number of people believe that the richest person
is the happiest person
,
whereas others hold a view, that there are Accept space
,
also
others factors which can make people happy. In my opinion,
having Accept space
,
good family
and friendsSuggestion
a good family
,
good environment at Accept space
,
work
place are more important aspects than money
.
it
is irrefutable that Suggestion
It
money
can easily fullfil
all the basics as well as put in effect
fulfil
fulfils
extragavance
needs of a the quality of exceeding the appropriate limits of decorum or probability or truth
extravagance
person
such
as clothes,
big Accept space
,
bunglow
and long car.a small house with a single story
bungalow
Also
, affluent people can send their children to the well reputated
schoolslook on as or consider
reputed
,
which would help them to accelerate the career and have more opportunities in the future.Accept space
,
Moreover
,
they can do the Accept space
,
treatment
of the diseases from the renowned hospitals.For
instance
,
Accept space
,
Indian cricket team player
"Yuvraj Singh" did the Suggestion
an Indian cricket team player
the Indian cricket team player
treatment
of his cancer,
even it was in its Accept space
,
last
stage because he had lot
of Suggestion
lots
money
.
On the other hand
,
if people are having a good familyAccept space
,
,
Accept space
,
then
no other thing of
the world can give them happiness of Suggestion
in
this
kind.In fact,
they do not easily become the victim of the ailments.Accept space
,
For
instance
,
a survey was conducted by an agency inAccept space
,
,
which they found that 70% of people who were suffering from the depression were Accept space
,
belong
to the rich class.
If people have less Suggestion
belonging
belonged
amount
of cash but, they have the good
surroundings as well as Suggestion
the best
work
of their choice at the officesSuggestion
the work
,
Accept space
,
then
it makes them more ecstatic.Many people today are earning enormous
Suggestion
an enormous amount
amount
of money
,
but they are not cheerful with the Accept space
,
work
they are doing at
their offices.Suggestion
in
For
instance
,
Accept space
,
although
the government employees get the high salary
Suggestion
a higher salary
higher salary
the highest salary
the higher salary
,
but they are not satisfied with the Accept space
,
work
in which they are engaged in there
offices.of them or themselves
their
Thatis
why they want to go to Suggestion
That is
private sector
.
To concludeSuggestion
the private sector
,
while it is undeniable that Accept space
,
money
can easily satisfy all the luxury requirements ,
in order to happy others factors Accept space
,
also
matters such
as family and friends,
if a Accept space
,
person
do not have
these Suggestion
does not have
then
the money
is of no use for him.Submitted by preetichawla899 on
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