The chart below show the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the
amount
of money
of two countries, France
and the UK spent on five products, namely: cars
, computers, books, perfume
and cameras
in 2010, and it
measured Correct pronoun usage
apply
by
Change preposition
in
pounds
sterling.
Overall
, it clears
that both nation Add a missing verb
is clears
group
tend to buy Change to a plural noun
groups
cars
with the highest using money
. In the UK, perfume
is the kind
of goods
with the Fix the agreement mistake
good
amount
of spending money
with
the lowest; Change preposition
apply
however
, cameras
were the kind
of goods
with the amount
of using money
at least in France
.
The amounts
of Fix the agreement mistake
amount
money
spent cars
in Change preposition
on cars
France
were
higher than Correct subject-verb agreement
was
computers
by 25,000 Change preposition
on computers
pounds
sterling. Total spending on books, perfume
in Correct word choice
and perfume
France
was 300,000 pounds
, 200,000
Correct word choice
and 200,000
pounds
respectively. Cameras
were the kind
of goods
with the lowest expenditure was 150,000 pounds
sterling.
The amount
of money
spent perfume
was the lowest during the given period diagram under 150,000 Change preposition
on perfume
pounds
sterling. Computers and cameras
were about the same in the amounts of using money
, with the amounts of spending cameras
higher just
10,000 Change preposition
by just
pounds
sterling. Cars
were kind
of Correct article usage
the kind
goods
with the highest expenditure was
455,000 Unnecessary verb
apply
pounds
sterling, compared to approximately 405,000 pounds
sterling of
books.Change preposition
for
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, money, france, cars, perfume, cameras, pounds, kind, goods with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 4 times.
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