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In the modern world image is becoming a more powerful way of communication than the written world to what extend do you agree or disagree?

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The relative importance of power has always been a topic of debate whenever people discuss communication. Many believe that written
massages
a communication (usually brief) that is written or spoken or signaled
messages
 can impress the readers more, while others believe that a
picture
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 can speak a thousand words. On the
one
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 hand, written messages can be considered as
one
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 of the most traditional methods of communication. Even though, they have been delivered by different means;
such
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 as, on papers,
emails text
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emails, text
 messages, letters and so on, their effectiveness has helped them maintain their popularity throughout decades and centuries. By changing a few words, a simple sentence can be turned into a smart advertisement or motto which has the ability to impress thousands of people. A good case in point could be many outstanding quotes by famous writers and philosophers that have lasted through times and are still popular and have the power to move people.
On the other hand
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, pictures can attract more sympathy and understanding. A good
picture
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 can deliver a powerful message. It can lead people to participate in different activities
such
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 as humanitarian and philanthropic ones due to feeling sympathetic toward subjects of the
picture
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. If a person reads about
war
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the war
 in a newspaper they may feel bad whereas, a
picture
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 of
refugee’s situation
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the refugee’s situation
a refugee’s situation
 can evoke their empathy like nothing else In conclusion, I believe that pictures and written messages are not mutually exclusive. A
picture
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 accompanied with a smart message has far more impact than just the
picture
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 or vice versa. Both, creating messages as well as capturing pictures, are considered as arts
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,
one
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 will not omit the other
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.
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