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Nowadays, many people spend less and less time at home. What are the causes of this? What are the effects of this on individuals and on society

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Most of the people today spend their valuable
time
 in places
such
 as offices
,
Accept space
,
fitness
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
, entertainment
,
Accept space
,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
 rather than at home.
This
 has been a great issue.In my opinion,
time
 spend in our house should be equal to the
time
 spend outdoors.
Firstly
, the main problem for
this
 issue is because of
lack
Suggestion
the lack
a lack
 of
healthy relationship
Suggestion
a healthy relationship
healthy relationships
 between family members.
Nowdays
Suggestion
Nowadays
, the persons in a family have less interaction with each other than they were in the past.
This
 is mainly due to the introduction of
digital world
Suggestion
the digital world
.
Accept space
.
 It has been a great
imposture
a person who makes deceitful pretenses
imposter
impostor
 to the society of
world
Suggestion
the world
.We spend more of our valuable
time
 in these digital gadgets.
On the other hand
, people are more concerned about their self improvement in their career rather than their own family problems.
Secondly
, The effects are classified into two main perspectives. One is
problem
Suggestion
the problem
a problem
 faced by a single person while the other is
problem
Suggestion
a problem
the problem
 faced by a community.
For instance
,
Accept space
,
most of the people in
this
 present world have the habit of being alone rather than to be in a family.
This
 has been a major cause for the people to stay away from their home.
However
, the effects in a society
are varied
Suggestion
vary
 from person to person. As said before, if people started their
life
Suggestion
lives
 to be stranded
alone
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alone, then
then
 there will be vast changes in the society. It will change the people's mindset of family and their home. In conclusion, I personally suggest people to be in
family
Suggestion
the family
a family
families
 rather than to be stranded.
This
 will create a great changes in the future generations.
Thus

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