Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations, while others believe they should get one long vacations. Give the advantages of both and express your own point of view

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'Vacations, holidays, leaves' are the most exciting words to anyone, particularly to children, it is the happiest thing for them followed by toys. Usually, 40 or 60 days (approximately
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and half months or two months) will be given as
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vacation holidays
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vacation, holidays
at the end of
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academic
year
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, which is quite long. Children see these periods at a
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for refreshment like going to tour, to meet their long distance relative, spend some more
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with street friends, etc. A school is instructed to run the premises for 10 months in a
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. Now here comes the need for discussing whether long
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or multiple shorter vacations, are good.
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group of the people says,
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of giving long
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, it can be splinted.
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.e., multiple short vacations) When holidays are given in a frequent manner,
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of studying for a long
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as well as
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of the long
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diminishes, or
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gets vanished we can say. 'Instant refreshments' create fresh mind, an interest in studies, so that children would study better. Because, they study
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term and take small rest and
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study for 2nd term, exam finishes and again a small period of holiday and so on.
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short break will make the child's mind ready for the
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upcoming challenges. But for the schools it may be quite difficult as they cannot meet out the academic span given by MOEs. And
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, some festival holidays, local public holidays, national holidays, unexpected holidays due to weather condition, are there. Of course, these holidays resembles as a short
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.
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, another group of people, believes
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vacation
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- Long
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is good enough for children to catch up with their
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classes. They can go for a long trip, Summer fun classes. Take
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, In my home town, annual holidays will fall in the month of April mid - May.
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is the
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of hot summer. The temperature is desperately high. Taking
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in mind, our school authorities, decided to finish the academic
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in the month of April and reopen the schools on June 1st week. We normally go to some hill stations to enjoy with family and friends. In order to cut off the
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, some fun summer activities are conducted. We can consider
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option,
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flies,
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two month
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is not enough for us. We will be eagerly waiting to see our old friends, and find new friends. Completely ready to go
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class. So according to me, long duration will increase a sense of curiosity, eagerness. Or
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academic
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may be spliced into two terms and give holidays rather giving multiple short vacations.

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