Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations, while others believe they should get one long vacations. Give the advantages of both and express your own point of view

'Vacations, holidays, leaves' are the most exciting words to anyone, particularly to children, it is the happiest thing for them followed by toys. Usually, 40 or 60 days (approximately
one
and half months or two months) will be given as
vacation holidays
Accept comma addition
vacation, holidays
at the end of
one
academic
year
, which is quite long. Children see these periods at a
time
for refreshment like going to tour, to meet their long distance relative, spend some more
time
with street friends, etc. A school is instructed to run the premises for 10 months in a
year
. Now here comes the need for discussing whether long
vacation
or multiple shorter vacations, are good.
One
group of the people says,
instead
of giving long
vacation
, it can be splinted.
(
Accept space
(
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
.e., multiple short vacations) When holidays are given in a frequent manner,
boredom
of studying for a long
time
as well as
boredom
of the long
vacation
diminishes, or
boredom
gets vanished we can say. 'Instant refreshments' create fresh mind, an interest in studies, so that children would study better. Because, they study
one
term and take small rest and
then
study for 2nd term, exam finishes and again a small period of holiday and so on.
This
short break will make the child's mind ready for the
next
upcoming challenges. But for the schools it may be quite difficult as they cannot meet out the academic span given by MOEs. And
also
, some festival holidays, local public holidays, national holidays, unexpected holidays due to weather condition, are there. Of course, these holidays resembles as a short
vacation
.
On the other hand
, another group of people, believes
One
vacation
- Long
vacation
is good enough for children to catch up with their
next
classes. They can go for a long trip, Summer fun classes. Take
for example
, In my home town, annual holidays will fall in the month of April mid - May.
This
is the
time
of hot summer. The temperature is desperately high. Taking
this
in mind, our school authorities, decided to finish the academic
year
in the month of April and reopen the schools on June 1st week. We normally go to some hill stations to enjoy with family and friends. In order to cut off the
boredom
, some fun summer activities are conducted. We can consider
this
option,
time
flies,
this
two month
vacation
is not enough for us. We will be eagerly waiting to see our old friends, and find new friends. Completely ready to go
next
class. So according to me, long duration will increase a sense of curiosity, eagerness. Or
one
academic
year
may be spliced into two terms and give holidays rather giving multiple short vacations.

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