In some countries celebrities complain about the way media publicize their private lives. Some people say that they should accept it as a part of their fame.do you agree or disagree?
I disagree with the view that celebrities have to accept the manner in which their private lives are made public by the
media
. lt
is undeniable that they are in the spotlight and want to be popular by choice. Correct your spelling
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However
, their rights to privacy need to be protected as well, as they too are humans. I shall put forth my arguments in this
essay. To commence with, celebrities are already under a lot of pressure to perform well, as they are public figures and are always in the public eye. Be it a politician, a sportsperson, a singer or an actor, all these professions require them to be at their best at all times. This
stress of someone constantly following them affects the way they perform, which ultimately leads to a loss for the masses. Secondly
, these celebs are role models for the people. When any negative side of their private life is exposed, their followers think it glamorous
to do the same, which is definitely detrimental Add a missing verb
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society as a whole. Correct article usage
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For example
, if people come to know that the celeb they adore, smokes and drinks in private life, they think there is nothing wrong in doing so and also
copy their idol. This
is where responsible journalism is needed. Undoubtedly, the
celebrities choose Correct article usage
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life for the
name and fame and to be Change the word
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the spotlight. Without the Correct your spelling
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media
, the term celebrity will not hold any meaning. However
, that doesn't mean that the media
and paparazzi have a right to stalk them at all times. To add to it, sensationalizing the news in order for the channel to get more TRP is unethical. Responsible journalism and some ethics need to be followed by those who get the news to the masses, as they may adversely affect someone's personal and professional lives. Who doesn't remember the unfortunate incident when the world lost a very eminent public figure, Lady Diana? That accident happened because the paparazzi were chasing the car she was travelling in. lt is something which could have been easily avoided, had the paparazzi been a little rational in their behavior
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To sum up
, it can be reiterated that responsible journalism means knowing its limits. Celebs too have their private lives and they have a right to privacy. The media
has to be judicious in knowing what to report and how much to report, and should never misuse its power.Submitted by divyavihol95 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite