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Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

#controls #media #attitudes #people
Technology
is flourishing
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has been flourishing
 by leaps and bounds and so is the media in
21st century
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the 21st century
. Today, all means of
information
 in
form
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a form
 of social media, news
media etc
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media, etc.
media etc.
media arts
 can be seen dominating public viewpoint in all forms of
individual's actions
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an individual's actions
 and thoughts. In my personal perspective
,
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,
 I think it is very arduous task to revert
this
 domination of media over the general masses.
This
eassy
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
 will
further
 substantiate the same with
relavent
having a bearing on or connection with the subject at issue
relevant
 points. To embark with, it is seen that revolution in terms of technology advancement has made every
information
availabe
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
 to an individual instantly. Today each one is
this
 world is using
smart phone
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smart phones
a smart phone
 and various kinds of media apps which keep them updated about world affairs by means of notifications. Apart from
this
 multimedia
information
sources
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source
 like television
,
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,
 radio
,
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,
magazines etc
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magazines, etc.
magazines etc.
is
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are also playing
also
 playing an imperative role in moulding the choices of people. And additive use of these various forms of communications has made public to believe blindly in claimed
information
.
Hence
, all
this
 is making quite difficult for
general masses
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the general masses
 to infer which source of
information
 is correct and
further
 leading to
choas
a state of extreme confusion and disorder
chaos
 in the society due to a lot of
information
 sources claiming their input to be correct for a particular product, news, political
opinion etc.
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opinion, etc.
Further
 adding to the advantage of
this
attched
being joined in close association
attached
etched
emotions
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emotionally
emotion
 to the various sources of media
,
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,
 the top bosses
take
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takes
 the merit of ignorant public for their personal benefits. For an example
,
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,
the
contoroller
someone who maintains and audits business accounts
controller
 of
main line
inject into the vein
mainline
 national media has capacity to mould the public opinion in terms of their political beliefs and the same has been seen in recent United Stated of America's
president
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presidential
 elections where Fox national media biased their news to mould the opinion of
general public
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the general public
 to their advantage.
Moreover
, with upcoming so many forms of social media platforms the product advisory and
romours
gossip (usually a mixture of truth and untruth) passed around by word of mouth
rumours
 take
second
 to spread which sometimes prove to show some quite grave effects. To conclude,
this
 incessant growth of media's role in an individual's life can have some
deterimental
(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury
detrimental
 effects in form of moulding their decisions and choices to their advantage. So, there is exigent need of public awareness to have supervision over the source and type of
information
.

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