Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
So, according to few people children's playing activities have to be informed like which can help them in their academic
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there is no use of it.
So here I am talking about educational activities, like it can be pretty useful. Because it has two advantages like children, are enjoying as well as getting some information. In Linking Words
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it's a game, but it provides lots of information and children can definitely learn lot's of techniques which can certainly enhance their thinking abilities.
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activity like playing outside lets say "Hide and Seek", certainly it can't be considered as educational. So my one point is it helps children balance out their overall life, like it helps to ease out the pressure that they might be feeling from their studies. It can be considered as a break from the stressful activities, because as a child sometimes study could be very overwhelming. And Use synonyms
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