Graph depicting means of transportation in the year 1990 and 2010

The graphic depicts the
number
of trips made by kids (from ages 5 to 12) on various transportation systems in a certain country within two years. In 1990, walking recorded the highest
number
in the transport system, as it seemed that people walked more than 12 million times that year.
In
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During
that same year, buses were the most used after walking, followed by cycling, walking and cars. It is
also
noted that there was a significant decrease in the
number
of people that walked in 1990
to
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with
the
number
of people that walked in 2010. In 2010, the
number
of
peoplw
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
who cars as a means of transportation rose to over ten million, as against what it was in 1990, at a little over four million people. Cycling was recorded as the least used type of transportation in 2010, with walking and bus the
second
to the least, followed by the buses,
then
walking and
ofcourse
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of course
car passengers recording the highest
number
. In each of the transport systems (apart from the
cars
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car
users), there was a significant decrease in their usage
betwee
internal to, involving members of (a group of people)
between
1990 and 2010.
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