You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are goint to do about it.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to formally bring to your attention an issue I have encountered regarding my lost suitcase.I travelled by plane to
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last
week , flight number pk41, seat number 33A.I am disappointed with your service,
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and
I believe it is important to address
this
matter for better resolution. I booked 'Pakistan International Airlines' , from London to attend my
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cousin's
wedding.The issue
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occurred
occurs
on 22nd December at 7 am. I called my mother to tell her that I
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arrived and ,
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talking on the phone, I looked down and my bag got lost. I made attempts to locate it yet as usual no was helping. My bag
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is navy
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, I wrote my all details to contact if it gets lost.It contains my all wedding clothes, wedding gifts and most importantly my laptop through which I work. I kindly request that you locate my bag as soon as possible.Airport security told me that you would examine all CCTV cameras and patrol the airport. Thank you for your prompt attention to
this
matter. I look forward to your reply.You may contact me via my phone number
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if you require
further
information or clarification. Trust that
this
matter will be resolved promptly. Thanks. Your faithfully. Dr Umar
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