You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are goint to do about it.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to formally bring to your attention an issue I have encountered regarding my lost suitcase.I travelled by plane to

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week , flight number pk41, seat number 33A.I am disappointed with your service,

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and

I believe it is important to address

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matter for better resolution. I booked 'Pakistan International Airlines' , from London to attend my

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cousin's

wedding.The issue

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occurred

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on 22nd December at 7 am. I called my mother to tell her that I

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arrived and ,

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talking on the phone, I looked down and my bag got lost. I made attempts to locate it yet as usual no was helping. My bag

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is navy

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, I wrote my all details to contact if it gets lost.It contains my all wedding clothes, wedding gifts and most importantly my laptop through which I work. I kindly request that you locate my bag as soon as possible.Airport security told me that you would examine all CCTV cameras and patrol the airport. Thank you for your prompt attention to

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matter. I look forward to your reply.You may contact me via my phone number

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if you require

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information or clarification. Trust that

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matter will be resolved promptly. Thanks. Your faithfully. Dr Umar

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coherence cohesion

Try to maintain a logical flow of ideas from one paragraph to the next to enhance clarity.

coherence cohesion

Consider splitting some sentences to avoid run-on sentences and improve readability.

task achievement

The letter includes a polite and formal tone throughout, which is suitable for the purpose.

coherence cohesion

The introduction and closing of the letter are appropriately structured, creating a sense of politeness and resolution.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

212 words

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A noticeable lack of students opting for science subjects at universities is observed in various countries. What are the reasons and what are the effects on society?

life experience could better gained through family and friends but other say personal experience is better. what are the advantages of both views. Which ones is better