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Although most people are richer than in the past, modern life seems very stressful and the number of people suffering from stress is at record levels. What are the main causes of stress in modern life, and how could stress be reduced

#people #life #stress #record #levels
These days, the
stress
 rate in people working in
city center
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the city centre
city centre
a city centre
have reached
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has reached
peak
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a peak
the peak
. Many
says
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say
 that a life in the city makes them be inevitably under by several problems in society.
This
 essay will look into the main causes of
stress increasing
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stress, increasing
 in the cities and propose some solutions. One of the root causes of the
stress
 is that people working in the city tend to
work
 excessively. One reason might
be they
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be, they
 usually stay at
work
 late and always come back home at night and are not able to relax or talk with their families.
For instance
, in Tashkent, most people sometimes
work
 ten- or 12- hours per day, which means that they cannot manage their
work
-life balance. A solution for the government could be cutting extra hours and fixing strictly nine-to-five jobs.
This
 would help reduce the
stress
 level significantly. Another reason is that people have
stress
 problems might be job insecurity. It is clear that people are worrying about their
work
 than it was used to be, because today employers and workers often sign a short-term contract and the latter do not know what could be happen at the end of the contract. As an example, in the Western world most companies have
contract
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contracts
contracted
 with employees just 1-2 years that it makes jobs more and more insecure. To address
this
 issue, governments should bring in a
law including
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law, including
 only long-term recruitment jobs and
therefore
 people will be less nervous about their job. To conclude, in my view, there is no doubt that
stress
 has an affection on more and more people by several reasons. Unlike authorities apply 8-hour job and reject short-term contracts, the
stress
 level
on
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of
 people will increase considerably. An urgent action needs to be taken,
otherwise
 the society might face even
great
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greater
 issues than
stress
 in the future.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic pressure
  • Cost of living
  • Financial strain
  • Workload
  • Job insecurity
  • Gig economy
  • Technology
  • Information overload
  • Social isolation
  • Digitally connected
  • Competitive world
  • High expectations
  • Societal expectations
  • Work-life balance
  • Relax and recharge
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