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These days students prefer to live on campus while studying at college or university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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Living on campus while studying is becoming increasingly popular. Every year, more student opts to stay on university campus as opposed to staying outside
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 essay will discuss the positive and negative of living on campus while studying. Students prefer to find an
accomodation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
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 on campus because it is very economical and it saves a lot of travel time.
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, individuals get the home and food at a subsidized or discounted rate in university campus.
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; Jawahar Lal Nehru university has its own hostels and cafeterias wherein students can get a house and food at a very low cost.
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, when students stay within the campus, they need not to travel from their home or rented
accomodation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
 to attend a lecture or class. So, the time they save can be utilised to put more focus on their study, which would lead to a better result.
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, Campus
accomodation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
accommodations
 while studying has its own limitations. The 2 main disadvantages are spoiled personal life & lots of rules and regulations. Since colleges/universities have shared rooms and accommodations,
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 there is no privacy. Students can jump anytime in one's room or bed. People can be often seen complaining about their roommate.
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, the College has their own set of rules which everyone needs to follow if they prefer to stay within educational institution premises.
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 students tend to break the rules while on campus, it gives them a feeling of non-accountability. In the end, it is quite ok to enjoy while studying and if college or academy campus can bring us some good friends as well as a good connect with our professors and teachers who can guide them real time
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, as per my opinion, it is a healthy trend.

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