many television news programmes show pictures of events in the news which people find upsetting. While television has a duty to report important news, it should not bring disturbing images into people’s homes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Mas media play a vital role in making people aware of what's happing around the globe. Television news programmes are one of the key assets for the knowledge being delivered to households. I strongly abide by the fact that the news channels have a job and a duty to update the society with the latest stuff happening in the world, but some people find it disturbing watching certain scenes and pictures in the news report. In the forthcoming paragraphs

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will shed some light on the topic along with my own views.

Firstly

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believe that the mankind has the right to know what disturbances are being made all over the world with true facts and illustrations and

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can only be done on a global level with the help of news reports. Talking about the violent images showed in the reports

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adhere to the importance of showcasing people the level of cruelty or injustice a place or a particular society is up to. And

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can be truly revealed with illustrations. No matter how disturbing the scenarios are it is the moral duty of every tv news programme to collect the evidences.

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understand that some people cannot see or experience

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extent of volatile and vulnerable disturbing pics being showcased through the tv reports. And I think

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is the situation where online assets can help. Stating that, we all know that the modern era is the period of easy access internet and all the news channels have the access to social media and even their own official application. The scenes that are panic creating should be shown blurred in the tv channels, but the description can be given if somebody wants to see these pictures voluntarily they can access the social platforms or the application. In a nutshell,

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would recapitulate by stating that watching disturbing stuff and violent pictures is a task that should be done as a voluntary action and

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should not be shown publicly but saying that it should still be available for the people who wish to see that.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

353 words

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many television news programmes show pictures of events in the news which people find upsetting. While television has a duty to report important news, it should not bring disturbing images into people’s homes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People move to different location to live in. what are the reasons? is it a positive or negative development?

In country where there is a high unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who will have no hop of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Do you agree that the advantages cars bring outweigh the disadvantages?

There are more and more effective security measures in large cities to reduce the crime. Does this endeavor bring more benefits than problems?