Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that t types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, leaders from many countries put their attention on the economic growth and seem to ignore other factors
such
as education
, science-technology, or health system. In contrast
, other governments have a different vision that they should focus on every kind of progress
instead
of concentrating on the economic progress
. In my opinion, I am convinced with the thought of equal development.
To start with the side which only pay attention to business and finance. Firstly
, I may agree that money is the first
condition for everyone, every country to be wealthy because if we have enough strength of economy, we can do or buy anything such
as food, houses, clothes and so on. The UAE, for example
, is well-known as the wealthiest one because they have a plenty of sources of fossil fuel, which can be traded with a lot of money. In addition
, president of the US, Donald Trump, had been a rich person before he was elected to be a nation's leader. Thus
, it is necessary for countries to pay attention to the economic progress
.
On the other hand
, some governments consider they have to take care equally both sides of their country's progress
because these are all important. To illustrate, science and technology growth also
encourage the economic situation due to the demands of high-tech inventions nowadays. Furthermore
, the education
has a vital role in the development a nation as well, for example
, modern countries such
as Japan, Canada or Australia all have a quite great education
system. All in all, I bet that countries could be stronger and modern if they put the focus on all essential aspects fairly.
To summarize, doing business and making money are
necessary because these can bring a country to be richer. Suggestion
is
Moreover
, we should also
think about developing other important aspects which are education
, technology in order to reduce risks from being old-fashioned. In my view, if countries can take the second
statement of equal development, these would become the great nations.Submitted by dangvinh1212 on
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