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Some people think books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree?

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Books have been a great source of
information
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 and entertainment since ages.
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, in recent times, books are thought to be losing their importance. I strongly concur with the given statement. And I will support
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 view with arguments in the following paragraphs. To start with, thanks to the apparition of the
Internet
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, all
information
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 is now available with just one click. The invention of the
internet
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 has changed the way people gain knowledge because it’s easy to access to the
internet
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. As an example, if we need
information
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 about news or topic, all we have to do is enter the keyword into Google's search bar. And in less than a
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, all the
information
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 we need is available for free. So people tend to search
information
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 online rather than spending money on books which are often more expensive.
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, finding
information
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 from a book often takes a lot of time. Apart from that, the
internet
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 provides a lot of entertainment material which can be existed and downloaded easily
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 as movies, novels… And even smart phones have access to the
internet
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 these days. So people would spend their free time on the websites.
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 social media is playing an integral part in communication with friends and relatives.
For instance
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, Facebook and Twitter enable people to express feelings, opinions, play games, share photos and memories.
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, the demand for reading books has decreased significantly.
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 books are a great source of
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 and
entertainment but
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entertainment, but
 with the technological advancement, it is losing it’s important.
Consequently
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, books are losing their readers.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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