the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
The map illustrates
about
the road access for hospitals in a town between the period from 2007 to 2010.
Change preposition
apply
Firstly
, the city hospital is surrounded by the ring road and there were six bus
stops besides
Replace the word
beside
the
Hospital Rd. Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, from the two maps can compare that City Hospital and the staff car park remained in the same place. On the other hand
, in 2010, seen that the administration has
changed the area around the hospital. Unnecessary verb
apply
Moreover
, there is seen some differences like public
car park and staff car park is in different places, Correct article usage
the public
also
included roundabout on the way, there is
seen two roundabouts, one is the below Change the verb form
are
in
city roadway and another is in up attached Change preposition
apply
with
the Hospital Rd. Change preposition
to
Bus
station is larger than the previous one and it is open Add an article
The bus
A bus
for
two sides. In one lane Change preposition
from
bus
will enter Correct article usage
the bus
in
the Change preposition
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bus
station and the other side is open for going out.
To sum up
, the modifications around the hospital it is useful for the people and
Correct word choice
apply
as well as
for the doctors and staffs
.Fix the agreement mistake
staff
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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