The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The three pie charts illustrate how many
articles
from academic journals are read weekly by PhD
students
and junior lecturers compared to other students
at an Australian university.
For example
, the overwhelming majority of those studying doctorates
read at least twelve Change preposition
for doctorates
articles
per week in comparison with the average student. The figures were 80 per cent
and twelve per cent
respectively.
Furthermore
, only five per cent
of PhD
level students
read between one and five articles
, whereas
the average for all students
in this
category is a hefty 67 per cent
.
Meanwhile, for junior lecturers
the pattern appears to be slightly different. Most read six or more Add a comma
,lecturers
articles
per week (99 per cent
), but out of this
total 24 per cent
read twelve or more, which is almost a third
of the corresponding figure for PhD
level students
.
It is clear that
those students
who are researching for a PhD
read more articles
than either junior lecturers or other students
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Vocabulary: Replace the words articles, phd, students, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrate" in your introduction.
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