Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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While many parents are using books as a learning material for their children, some argue that they should use online reading materials to make progress of learning. In my opinion, parents should utilize not only printed materials, but
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internet as a teaching tool. On the one hand, books are very familiar to the children and even they do not understand a word, they can gain knowledge by looking the pictures in a book.
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, when a book cover is very attractive, the kids will pay more attention to reading.
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, children-books are not very expensive to purchase for parents.
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tablets or phones are not good for eyesight of every child, books are very suitable for prolonged reading.
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, when I was young, my parents permitted me to use online every time and I think
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is the main reason why I became a short-sighted person.
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, we can search various e-books, including cartoons for children. Unlike books, the internet
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provides mobile pictures which can persuade children.
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, if we leave our children with a tablet, they will probably be quiet by searching everything that they want to know from the net
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of messing around the house.
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, children will never get bored if they have to learn from online. Nowadays, some schools have started using tablets or iPad as a teaching material in many primary schools in modernized countries like USA, or Australia. To sum up, no one can deny that books are the fundamental materials for every young learners,
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, I personally believe that many parents and schools will
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substitute books with online to teach their children in near future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • online reading materials
  • printed materials
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • technology
  • convenience
  • interactivity
  • accessibility
  • visual appeal
  • physical books
  • parental guidance
  • digital skills
  • screen time
  • learning experience
  • personal preference
  • comprehension
  • critical thinking
  • creativity
  • word recognition
  • grammar
  • vocabulary development
  • reading habits
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