Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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In the modern world, many nations are becoming more and more alike, because human being are capable to purchase the same stuff anywhere from the global. Overall, it is more negative developmental than positive.
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However, in
the coming paragraph I will explain both developments.
Firstly
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, in the global
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is a positive upgrade because is a good way to buy anything in the world and its good facilities.
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Therefore it
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Therefore, it
perhaps saves life for people. Let me give you an example, I remember in the
last
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month, I purchased a medicine from the USA because it is a USA company and
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medicine is not available anywhere in my country. So,
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, if I don't get
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medicine maybe that day I am no more. These sites help me to save my life.
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Secondly it
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Secondly, it
is affected in employment,
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he ruins our culture because the our traditional clothes available in everywhere.
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, they don’t not respect any national culture.
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, it is
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a fact our economics.
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, I live in a Pakistan where everyone has a smartphone, but the Pakistani made only mobile and majority people don’t have these phone they use different in my country iPhone as Samsung popular
moreover
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these two companies are American national company
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these facts were affected on national background. In conclusion, after analyse all the information I reach in my opinion, I think
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development is a more negative effect on our community and every country background.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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