Even more people are spending most of their time at work nowadays, which leaves almost nothing for personal life. Do you think this trend has more advantages o disadvantages for people?
Time
has always had a great value for people because it cannot be replaced by anything else. Use synonyms
However
, people often choose to invest it in their professional Linking Words
life
rather than their personal one. Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss why Linking Words
this
trend has more disadvantages than advantages for people.
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To begin
with, nowadays the Linking Words
time
people spend on the job is increasing significantly. Use synonyms
This
could be seen as an advantage if we think about the opportunity Linking Words
work
brings with it. Use synonyms
For example
, more Linking Words
work
means more money, which leads to a better quality of Use synonyms
life
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Furthermore
, a better quality of Linking Words
life
brings with it another advantage, the evolution of society. Use synonyms
This
is strongly connected with the fast evolution of technology, the most important cause of the fact that people are working more than in the past. In fact, Linking Words
this
is an interesting paradox; technology makes our Linking Words
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life easier but,
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life easier, but
time
, it makes us Use synonyms
work
more. Use synonyms
For instance
, the mass production in a factory is mostly automatic; Linking Words
however
, people are working more extra hours to produce more so to increase their incomes. Even if it looks like a chain of prosperity, in fact, it is a vicious one, due to the sacrifices it requires from people.
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On the other hand
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work place
means less a place where work is done
workplace
time
for private Use synonyms
life
. The greatest disadvantage, in my opinion, is that people are becoming less connected with themselves and with their families and close friends. Use synonyms
For example
, a person who spends ten hours at Linking Words
work
has a very limited free Use synonyms
time
, and most of Use synonyms
this
is for regular domestic activities like cooking, shopping, maybe cleaning the house, so for communication with other people remain almost no Linking Words
time
at all. If Use synonyms
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person Linking Words
also
has children, the situation will be even worse. Another important disadvantage is the lack of Linking Words
time
to enjoy the achievements of the amount of Use synonyms
work
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For instance
, many people have a lot of money, but they do not have Linking Words
time
to spend it, and at some point they will come to realize that the Use synonyms
time
has passed and they have not much to be proud of it, because they are alone and with a boring Use synonyms
life
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Last
but not least, too much Linking Words
work
can cause serious health problems, both psychological and physical. Many people suffer because of stress, depression, heart diseases and so on. All in all, too much Use synonyms
work
can have serious negative effects on people.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
time
is, probably, our most precious asset we can deal with. I consider that spending more Use synonyms
time
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work
has more disadvantages than benefits in a long term. At the end of the day, we must find the balance between professional and private Use synonyms
life
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