In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answers and provide relevant example and experience you might have.
Undeniably, educational institutions and specialised hospitals are located in the urban areas in almost all countries around the globe. To equalise these facilities among the citizens of a
country
, most of the people have the opinion that government
should make regulations for compulsory rural service
after the graduation by the
professionals. Whereas others believe that it is an unethical interference with someone’s freedom. Suggestion
graduation by the
This
essay delves both
these views before arriving at a logical conclusion.
On one hand, mandatory service
after graduation by health professionals and educational faculty are astonishingly beneficial to the rural people. For instance
compulsory, one-three years rural service
for new teachers, doctors, dentists etc. will
alleviate the scarcity of trained professionals in the village area. Suggestion
Will
In addition
, those who have qualified from the government
institutions receiving a grant from the government
have their responsibility to serve the government
and the people. Moreover
, because of brain drain system community is getting very less service
from the talented professionals and compulsory work
in rural areas by new doctors and teachers will ensure that they concentrate more on serving people rather than planning to migrate to a rich country
. Rural people have to move to city
areas for better treatment and for their children’s education and this
has a negative consequence like overpopulation, increased crime rate and pollution in city
areas. Adopting this
strategy by the government
will ensure a better distribution of the population in both
rural and city
areas. Finally professionals
like doctors and teachers should focus primarily on serving people, not to amass fortunes. Unfortunately, teachers and doctors in many cases are far more concerned about money than helping people and few years’ compulsory Accept comma addition
Finally, professionals
work
in rural areas at the begging of someone’s career would be a great leap toward appositive mind-setup
by these professionals.
Suggestion
set up
On the other hand
, some others believe that in an independent country everybody
should have the freedom to decide where to Accept comma addition
country, everybody
work
and where to live. Any restriction and mandatory rules would violate their rights and would cause them to become frustrated. These professionals would then
dislike to work
or stay in their homeland and will try to migrate to a foreign country
. Furthermore
, this
should be a spontaneous decision made by a newly became doctor
and Suggestion
doctors
teacher
and should not be a forced decision. Suggestion
teachers
Hence
the supporters of this
view argue that compulsory work
in rural areas is both
unfair and harmful.
Put everything into consideration, I personally feel that for a rapid and complete development of a nation
Accept comma addition
nation, both
both
rural and city
areas should get focus for facilities and development. The government
should ensure the equal distribution of services and place new doctors and teachers in rural areas for few years
would be a great idea to help rural people and Suggestion
a few years
also
build a service
oriented mentality among these young professionals.Submitted by ravirajsavaliya27 on
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