In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answers and provide relevant example and experience you might have.

Undeniably, educational institutions and specialised hospitals are located in the urban areas in almost all countries around the globe. To equalise these facilities among the citizens of a

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, most of the people have the opinion that

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should make regulations for compulsory rural

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the graduation by the

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graduation by the

professionals. Whereas others believe that it is an unethical interference with someone’s freedom.

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essay delves

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these views before arriving at a logical conclusion. On one hand, mandatory

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after graduation by health professionals and educational faculty are astonishingly beneficial to the rural people.

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compulsory, one-three years rural

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for new teachers, doctors, dentists etc.

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alleviate the scarcity of trained professionals in the village area.

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, those who have qualified from the

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institutions receiving a grant from the

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have their responsibility to serve the

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and the people.

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, because of brain drain system community is getting very less

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from the talented professionals and compulsory

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in rural areas by new doctors and teachers will ensure that they concentrate more on serving people rather than planning to migrate to a rich

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. Rural people have to move to

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areas for better treatment and for their children’s education and

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has a negative consequence like overpopulation, increased crime rate and pollution in

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areas. Adopting

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strategy by the

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will ensure a better distribution of the population in

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rural and

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areas.

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Finally professionals

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like doctors and teachers should focus primarily on serving people, not to amass fortunes. Unfortunately, teachers and doctors in many cases are far more concerned about money than helping people and few years’ compulsory

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in rural areas at the begging of someone’s career would be a great leap toward appositive mind-

setup

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set up

by these professionals.

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, some others believe that in an independent

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country everybody

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country, everybody

should have the freedom to decide where to

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and where to live. Any restriction and mandatory rules would violate their rights and would cause them to become frustrated. These professionals would

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dislike to

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or stay in their homeland and will try to migrate to a foreign

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.

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,

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should be a spontaneous decision made by a newly became

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doctors

and

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teachers

and should not be a forced decision.

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the supporters of

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view argue that compulsory

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in rural areas is

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unfair and harmful. Put everything into consideration, I personally feel that for a rapid and complete development of a

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nation, both

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rural and

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areas should get focus for facilities and development. The

government

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should ensure the equal distribution of services and place new doctors and teachers in rural areas for

few years

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a few years

would be a great idea to help rural people and

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build a

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oriented mentality among these young professionals.