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As computers translate quickly and accurate, learning foreign language is a waste of time . To what extent do we agree or disagree? I disagree

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It has been said that since computers interpret swiftly and precisely, it is a waste of time trying to be multilingual.
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 machines have artificial intelligence, I agree that learning foreign languages exposes
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 opportunities across the globe.   The use of electronic devices in the quick and perfect transcription of languages is made possible because they are built with artificial intelligence.
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 enables them to produce results that could
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, Google is an online search engine that can convert words in any language accurately at any time and place. Thereby making it
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 of the most popular word search engine individuals use to understand various lingos lingo. 
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, we can say that the interpretation of languages rapidly and accurately has been proved by the use of computers.
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, learning to be multilingual increases ones
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 prospects internationally. Being able to speak foreign languages makes communication easy and gives an individual an edge over others in terms of employments and
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 potentials.
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, my friend Patrick
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, he benefitted from learning Deutsch before migrating. In conclusion, it would be logical to agree that even though computers help to translate languages quickly and accurately, knowledge of foreign lingo could help break communication barriers and elevate
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 capabilities.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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