Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local community. To what extent do you agree this statement

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The extent about companies should provide sports and social facilities for local
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statement mentioned below with detailed. And benefits about
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facility and events Companies should give social facilities and sports to local communities because of their employees are
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type of some out of box events. Sporting events are more enjoyable things to employees in India and mostly are participating for enjoying
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enjoy some social events like republic day celebrations and others one
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type of events to workers are interested to work with companies because of other events they should
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increasing because of the employees are happy with the
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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