Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

In
modern era
Suggestion
the modern era
, technology is escalating like a wildfire.
dwellers
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Dwellers
read news on their electrical devices and the value of newspapers is disappear continuously.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
completely agree with the aforementioned notion and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will articulate my views in upcoming paragraphs with relevant epitome. To embark with, there are
manifold
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a manifold
of reason why people prefer to read news on
internet
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the internet
.
first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
First
and foremost is they take their
smartphones
Suggestion
smart phones
with them every time and when they want to read
news
Suggestion
the news
then
they use it for reading.
Moreover
, read news their choice as for so with the help of
internet
individuals easily search those news which they want to read apart from that
on
Suggestion
in
internet
news about all things and subjects are uploaded. Moving with the same pendulum
,
Accept space
,
there are some more points
,
Accept space
,
which bolster my view.
Initially
,
internet
Suggestion
the internet
is cheaper than newspapers.
For instance
, the monthly pack of recharge
include
Suggestion
includes
internet
data
,
Accept space
,
calls and
messeges
a communication (usually brief) that is written or spoken or signaled
messages
on the other hand
masses have to pay for
newspaper
Suggestion
the newspaper
a newspaper
newspapers
.
Last
but not
least news
Suggestion
less news
channel
broadcast
Suggestion
broadcasts
their live performance on YouTube
,
Accept space
,
Google and dwellers easily know about the news of every nook and corner of the world. If someone
want
Suggestion
wants
to read the news about
foreign country
Suggestion
a foreign country
,
Accept space
,
they read with the help of
internet
. To summarise,
internet
Suggestion
the internet
is a boon for humanity. It helps humans in every field
such
as
bussiness
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
,
Accept space
,
study
,
Accept space
,
work and so on. People should use it for their news reading purpose.

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  • reliable
  • credible
  • focused
  • immersive
  • tangibility
  • tradition
  • access
  • digital devices
  • demographics
  • older generation
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