In many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. However, it also has negative effects. Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages

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In recent years international exploration has turned a significant source of the economy and it has some negative consequences.
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essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of
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statement and in my opinion, it has more positive than
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characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
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, there is a plethora of advantages to the exploration department.
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, travel is a major source of income in
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contemporary world.
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is because overseas holidays are more common now, and visitor like to spend money on different activities, shopping, explore new things and food, which is eminent in that particular area, in the host nation.
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eventually boosts the economy of the rustic. What is more, exploration is
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a great sources
of employment generation for young people.
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, if we expand our
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one area to another area automatic bureaucrat release job notifications for those places so that it is helpful to people, who are facing unemployment.
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but not least, a country can gain brand image by providing
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a person who changes location
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travellers
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spots like liberty of statue
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Eiffel tour and the great wall of china.
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, in 2019, The Hindu Times reported that India becomes the
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place in the
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department and the homey's economy increased by 40%.
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, there are a few drawbacks for the
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department, they are like some unknown and dangerous viruses may be entered into our nation because of the mode of
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sightseers
a sightseer
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, Ebola virus entered Japan country because of one South Korean tourist and they caught him soon eventually they follow the preventive measures;
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, nations natural resources may over exploit because of meeting the needs of increased visitors.
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, recently India announced the Tajmahal is in danger and it's lost shyness, and to prevent the problem India banned the visitors for some months. In conclusion,
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tourism
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has some drawbacks like damaging natural resources, it gives us a lot of advantages
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as infrastructure and economic developments. And in my opinion, it is more good than harm.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Revenue
  • Accommodation
  • Cultural exchange
  • Infrastructure
  • Pollution
  • Erosion
  • Overcrowding
  • Economic dependency
  • Global events
  • Sustainable tourism
  • Mutual understanding
  • Strain on natural resources
  • Foot traffic
  • Local traditions and customs
  • Cultural awareness
  • Vulnerable
  • Pandemics
  • Political instability
  • Residue
  • Host country
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