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You are organising a local committee meeting. You would like a local MP to attend the meeting to contribute to a discussion about green areas in the community. Write a letter of invitation to the MP's secretary, Mrs Shelton. In your letter • introduce your committee • say why you are having the meeting • invite the MP to attend Write about 150 words. You do not need to write addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear…

#committee #mp #discussion #areas #community #invitation #secretary #mrs #shelton #addresses #dear…
Dear Mrs Shelton, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that our “Green world”
committee
 is going to organise a meeting
this
 Saturday in our
committee
 hall regarding green areas. It will be an honour for us
,
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 if any of our local MP’s attend
this
 meeting and discuss
about
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the importance of trees in our life.
Firstly
, I would like to introduce our
committee
with
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 you. We as
“Green
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 world”
committee
plants
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 100tress every month and
also
 insist people
to
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do the same. We run small campaigns in nearby schools and colleges to make sure that everyone is aware of
importance
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 of plants in our lives. On Earth
day
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, we are conducting a meeting in which we will educate people about nurturing small plants, which can be grown at home and are incomparable in providing oxygen. On
this
 auspicious occasion, we would be pleased if any
our
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 MP’s spare
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 from their busy schedule and share their great ideas with us. I look forward
for
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 your response. Yours faithfully, Honey
kumar
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