Many museums charge for admission, while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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is charged

for admission or not,

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is always a debatable question and both have own advantages and disadvantages as well. If

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have avoided

them.And some would like to pay for it.

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old or historical

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is organized

by government

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by government, then

then

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the government

should not

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charge

for it, and giving free for all.

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for

carrying all the bills or charges for

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. Because of they are already

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charged

other taxes, and

this

money

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will overcome all the

charges of

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the museum

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only available in government

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a private museum

private museums

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. Due to private

museum

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closely similar or comparable in kind or quality or quantity or degree

same

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should carry the all

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should carry all the

facilities and bills like

museum

's light bill,

employers

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employer's

income, security reasons

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is paid

by own income that's why they should

charge

for it.

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they are beneficial

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for visitors and local authorities as well.

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for

amount

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daughter of Nehru who served as prime minister of India from 1966 to 1977 (1917-1984)

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free for all in some respective areas and they are

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are

payable

one

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the basic unit of money in Sri Lanka; equal to 100 cents

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Cultural heritage
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Many museums charge for admission, while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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