Many museums charge for admission, while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays,
museum
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museums
the museum
are always
been
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being
attention seeker point of visitors. But
museum
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the museum
a museum
are charging
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is charging
is charged
for admission or not,
this
one
is always a debatable question and both have own advantages and disadvantages as well. If
mussem
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the museum
museum
a museum
museums
are charging
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is charging
are charged
is charged
for
entry
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entry, then
then
some peoples
are avoid
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are avoiding
have avoided
them.And some would like to pay for it.
Although
old or historical
museum
are organized
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is organized
by government
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by government, then
then
government
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the government
should not
charging
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charge
for it, and giving free for all.
Government
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The government
are
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is
ready
to
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for
carrying all the bills or charges for
museam
a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
museums
. Because of they are already
charges
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charging
charged
other taxes, and
this
money
will overcome the all
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will overcome all the
charges of
museum
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the museum
.
This
facility
are
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is
only available in government
museum
not in
private
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a private museum
private museums
museum
. Due to private
museum
are organized by the
some
closely similar or comparable in kind or quality or quantity or degree
same
company and they
should carry the all
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should carry all the
facilities and bills like
museum
's light bill,
employers
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employer's
income, security reasons
are paid
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is paid
by own income that's why they should
charge
for it.
Although
they are beneficial
one
for visitors and local authorities as well.
However mussems's
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However, museums
However museums
should
charge
or not
this
one
his own convince but if they
charge
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charge, then
then
amount are not very high. They should
charge
for
amount
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an amount
the amount
amounts
like 20 to 100 as per him facilities. Like in my city the mahatma
gandhi
daughter of Nehru who served as prime minister of India from 1966 to 1977 (1917-1984)
Gandhi
museum
are
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is
free for all in some respective areas and they are
Chargeing
to make a rush at or sudden attack upon, as in battle
charging
changing
in other
areas but
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areas, but
fees
is
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are
payable
one
around to 30-70
ruppes
the basic unit of money in Sri Lanka; equal to 100 cents
rupees
ropes
as well In conclusion
museum
are charging or not
this
one
him convince. But if they are changing for that
then
this
amount should be payable
one
for all visitors as well.

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