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Nowadays the day many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the type of rela

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Recently,
technology
 has revolutionized
humanbeings’
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human beings’
 life style in widely aspects especially
communication
 ways. Most of people believe that,
technology
 makes their relation easier rather than before.
Technology
 has impacted
communication
 in a variety of fields, ranging from business to education, and even personal relationship.
For example
, today businessmen are able to deposit or withdraw by useful applications, and they do not need to be present in financial institutes.
Secondly
, students can connect to their instructors via
technology
, too. Eventually, people are not interested in
face-to-face relation
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the face-to-face relation
, but they prefer to communicate remotely.
Accordingly
, Facebook, Twitter, Instagram and other websites and applications satisfy new generation’s modern needs. Most of people, especially youth, realise that
technology
 has had positive effects on interaction ways. Proponents of
this
 idea point that, new methods are possibly able to transfer data immediately, and with much higher
qualification
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quality
. Today, not only could data be sent by modern
communication
 devices, but
also
 photos and even texts may be conveyed.
Furthermore
, because of ever-rising connection techniques, new methods are less
costly which
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costly, which
 is more interesting for businessmen. On the other side, psychologists find that, changed methods of
communication
 are soulless. Undeniably, if people use modern instruments to interact with each other on excessive way, they will isolate
themselves which
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themselves, which
has
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have
 a variety of detrimental effects on social life. Overall,
although
 humankind has lost some moral values because of
new kind
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a new kind
 of relationship, we should not turn a blind eye to the advantages of
effects
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the effects
 of
technology
 on interaction. It seems that
benefits
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the benefits
 of
this
 issue outweigh drawbacks.
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