Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

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the
last
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century,
air
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pollution has become one of the problematic
phenomonon
any state or process known through the senses rather than by intuition or reasoning
phenomenon
in
humans
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human
human's
life.
some
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believe that there is nothing to do to reduce
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the effects
of pollution of
air
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on
creatures
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creatures'
lives.
nevertheles
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, experts claim that by taking some efficient actions human being will able to tackle
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there are some possible and effective actions which will help to decrease impacts of
poluutants
waste matter that contaminates the water or air or soil
pollutants
pollutant
. One possible solution could be to increase green spaces in different areas of each city.
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example, planting trees and flowers in the main sectors of factories and virtually in city
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
centre
which are the most polluted area.
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addition, governments should require authorities to allocate more space in cities to a green environment.
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approach not only is a
sollution
a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution
solution
solutions
to
air
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pollution, but
also
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makes cities more attractive to tourists, so that the economy of cities could be affected by the tourism industry. Another way to enhance the
quality
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of
air
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would be to restrict traffic of cars in each part of cities by some characteristics as car numbers.
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importantly
,
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,
governments should increase taxes
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by
using cars for people to encourage them to use public
transportation
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is clear that
athorities
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
authorities
allocate more budget to improve the
quality
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and quantity of public
transportation
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.
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example
,
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,
instigation in construction of subways monorails etc.
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on
roads, the cleaner
air
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in cities.
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sum up
,
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,
there are some efficient strategies to solve aforementioned difficulties.People and government both have a responsibility to tackle
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problem equally.
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a clear
air
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next generation
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the next generation
would be the minimum rights which they have.
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enhance the
quality
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of
air
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would be to restrict traffic of cars in each part of cities by some characteristics as car numbers.
more
Suggestion
More
importantly
,
Accept space
,
governments should increase taxes
of
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by
using cars for people to encourage them to use public
transportation
Use synonyms
instead
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of personal cars.
it
Suggestion
It
is clear that
athorities
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
authorities
allocate more budget to improve the
quality
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and quantity of public
transportation
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.
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for
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For
example
,
Accept space
,
instigation in construction of subways monorails etc.
the
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The
less cars
in
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on
roads, the cleaner
air
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in cities.
to
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To
sum up
,
Accept space
,
there are some efficient strategies to solve aforementioned difficulties.People and government both have a responsibility to tackle
this
Linking Words
problem equally.
giving
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Giving
a clear
air
Use synonyms
to
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next generation
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the next generation
would be the minimum rights which they have.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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