Government should put taxes on unhealthy food so that people eat healthy food. Do you agree or disagree?

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Less nutrition meal can cause many health problems. One of the ways to solve is by imposing high taxes on junk
foodstuff
, which I totally agree on
this
. While there are many ways to solve
this
like education, the
government
could make
this
foodstuff
less attractive to others, and people will more likely to choose
foodstuff
that with better nutritional value.
First
of all, when the authority adjusts taxes to the unhealthy
foodstuff
, the company will pass on the extra cost to the consumer that would raise the price. As the price increases,
this
makes the junk snack and
drink
far less attractive than buying food with high nutrition.
For example
, by enforcing high taxes on sugary
drink
, some parents would not want to buy it when they have cheaper options like fresh juice.
Therefore
, these families will start to adapt to nutritious
foodstuff
when they start to switch to cheaper options. So the
government
will very likely to help to reduce those less value foods. 
However
,
conversely
, the
government
could educate public on the possible consequences when we are eating unhealthily
besides
imposing taxes. The
government
's educational council could integrate in the information into the curriculum.
For example
, in my kindergarten, teachers are teaching small kids on how to avoid diabetes by avoiding sugary
drink
. Whereby, as
this
small kids are constantly flooded with video which showing sugary
drink
is bad for them, they would choose better food if they had started to learn
this
since they are young. To conclude, there are several ways to curb the issues, one of them is forcing the company to increase the cost of production, and constantly informing the public is
also
another important factor. If both of the suggestions are implemented properly, I could foresee more people will start making a better choice.
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