The graph shows the demand for energy and the energy available for fossil fuels in Freedonia from 1985 to 2005. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph shows the demand for energy and the energy available for fossil fuels in Freedonia from 1985 to 2005. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The line graph indicates the relationship between
demand
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the demand
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for
energy
and the
energy
available from fossil fuels in Freedonia during the period between 1985 and 2005. It is apparent that there are 2 opposite trends shown on the graph from 1985 to 2005. The
demand
for
energy
dipped steadily between 1985 and 1990 from 5
units
of
energy
to approximately 2
units
. From 1990 until about 1995,
energy
demand
appeared to level off and remained constant at about 2
units
of
energy
. From
this
time onward,
energy
demand
rocketed dramatically from 2
units
of
energy
in 1996 and is projected to reach 7
units
in the year 2005. In
constrast
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contrast
, the
energy
available showed
the
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a
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significant fluctuation in the period between 1985 and 2000. The amount of
energy
available from fossil fuels soared sharply from about 3.5
units
in 1985 until it reached a peak of 6.5 in 1995. From
this
point onwards, it is projected to slip back spectacularly until it
keep
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keeps
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steady at an availability level of around 2.5
units
from the year 2000.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the
demand
of
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for
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the
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apply
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energy
exceeded its supply. In the future, Freedonians will have to enforce
energy saving
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energy-saving
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measures or look towards the use of
alternatives
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alternative
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sources of
energy
.
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