Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there for this problem?

Undoubtedly our
earth
is getting warmer. There are several reasons why our global temperature is raised, but
also
there are several ways we can solve
this
. In
this
essay, I will discuss on how an industrial reformation has changed the globe became hotter while how the
government
could provide some solution to it.
First
and foremost, one of the causes of
this
is, as our economy needs to progressively improve so that our nation can become prosper, unfortunately,
this
has brought to many problems to our surroundings, and one of them is our mother-
earth
is getting warmer. Because of the industrial progressed, more and more factories are setting up.
Therefore
, these mushrooming factories set in will churn out more heat,
such
as smoke from chimneys and heat that generated from melting steel. Whereby these heats are trapped in our ozone and forced our
earth
's temperature raised.
Thus
, it is very heart broken to see these factories have made our globe is getting warmer.  Despite all
this
,
however
, there is the solution to it, the
government
could step in to improve the situation by implementing green policy.
This
green policy is translated into incentive. Due to
this
incentive, the company is benefited by reducing their operating costs if they can prove to the council that their products are using significantly less resources.
Therefore
, they could sell more to the market, and
this
will increase their competitiveness.
For instance
, as the competition built up, others will follow to innovate in order to gain from
this
incentive. So, if the
government
could allocate a certain amount of funds to incentivize factories, in the long run, they could bring positive impact to the global warming issues.  To conclude, as we progressed, we should not forget to take care on our environment. When the
government
could give allowance to alleviate
this problems
Suggestion
this problem
these problems
, while at the same time these companies will innovate together to innovate their products more greenly in order to save the
earth
. With all
this
, if we can cooperate together like
this
, I will
forsee
the front of the human head from the forehead to the chin and ear to ear
face
, at least, we are able to maintain the current temperature on
earth
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Climate change
  • Earth's atmosphere
  • Carbon dioxide
  • Methane
  • Nitrous oxide
  • Emissions
  • Renewable energy
  • Energy efficiency
  • Afforestation
  • Carbon footprint
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