In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of heath and fitness are decreasing. what do you think are the course of these problems and measures could be taken to solve them ?

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Now a
days
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day
weight
gaining is the major issue in all over the world. People from different age suffer
for
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from
this
problem.
This
issue is more effect on international countries. Because
there
of them or themselves
their
food is really very high in quality. All the products are rich in nutrients and fat there is not mixture of anything. According to my perception in most
asian
a native or inhabitant of Asia
Asian
countries like India or Pakistan. People do not do house chores, they hired maids
for
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to
work. They have cars because of
this
they do not go market without a car. That
make
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makes
them lazy
n
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
fat as well.
This
kind of thing
also
effect on their health. People became lazy, weak
n
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
dependent
also
. So if people do their house chores like mopping, dish washing or cloth cleaning that
chores
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chore
help
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helps
people to reduce
weight
because these are the old tips and tricks to
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
weight
in Asia. People have to follow calories counter and do half and hour walk is
also
helps
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helping
them to reduce
weight
.

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