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These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

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Nowadays, the trend that men take on the role of house-caring, while women are the breadwinners
instead
 is increasingly popular. There are many reasons for
this
, and I considered it as a positive development. In the modern society, parents have to adapt to major changes. The equal rights movement has made great success, and it becomes normal for
female
Suggestion
females
a female
the female
 to gain qualifications and pursue a career. It
also
 has become normal for
male
Suggestion
males
a male
the male
 to be househusband, which look after their children.
Besides
, couples have to decide whether who can carry the financial weights, as the rising cost of living has meant that both marriage partners need to work and save money before start a family, and
then
 consider if who can take care of the house-chores or make a more sufficient budget. In my opinion, the trend is innovative thinking and suitable in our modern society. We should be happy when we
live
go away from a place
leave
 a place where the rights between men and women are equal, and in which women are not struggling to sacrifice their careers. Relatively, it only seems fair when men are let to be relaxed before they leave their main jobs in order to concentrate on their home priorities if
this
 is what they want to do. Couples should be left to think about the consequences about which parental role each partner takes, according their abilities and needs. In conclusion, the major changes about objectives for men and women are a result of an innovative society we are living right now, and I believe that these developments are essential.
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