Some people think that the inteernet has brought people closer togethert while others that people and communities are bbecome more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Few people assume that due to
internet
people are
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people, are
close to each other.
On the other
hand few
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hand, few
people
thinks
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think
due to
internet
people are becoming so isolated.In
this
essay we will
disscus
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
discusses
positive and negative effects of
internet
on the people.How to use it in a better way. Due to
new teconology
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the new technology, internet
the new technology internet
new technology internet
internet
helps people to get close.
people
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People
who
is working
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are working
have worked
abroad and
studing
reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
standing
out of their countries can easily talk with their family members and friends
for instance
, in
U
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the U
.S
their
in or at that place
there
is
lot
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lots
of
internet
club where students use
internet
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the internet
and
do
engage in
make
vedio
the visible part of a television transmission
video
calls to their family.And due to social media people can easily talk
with
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to
their friends and family members who lives abroad.
On the other hand
people are so busy
on
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with
their social media they
are nt giving
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are not given
are not giving
time
to people around.
they
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They
have
lot
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lots
of
friend
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friends
on social
media but
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media, but
dont
do not
don't
have a single friend
to spend
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spend
a
time
with.
in
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In
this
way they
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a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
or
isolated with their own family and friend.
for
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For
instance in
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instance, in
italy
a republic in southern Europe on the Italian Peninsula; was the core of the Roman Republic and the Roman Empire between the 4th century BC and the 5th century AD
Italy
a lot of people are taking
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any of a class of drugs used to treat depression; often have undesirable side effects
antidepressant
medicine
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medications
due to isolation. In my opinion
,
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,
we should use
internet
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the internet
wisely.We should fix the
time
of
net
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the net
.And try to spend more
time
with friends and family.
we
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We
should keep
balance
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a balance
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • facilitated
  • connection
  • geographical barriers
  • social media platforms
  • sense of belonging
  • diverse perspectives
  • collaborate
  • share knowledge
  • excessive use
  • social isolation
  • face-to-face interaction
  • addicted
  • disconnection
  • physical surroundings
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • withdraw
  • false sense of connection
  • superficial relationships
  • polarization
  • echo chambers
  • balance
  • benefits
  • drawbacks
  • foster
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