Some people think that the inteernet has brought people closer togethert while others that people and communities are bbecome more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Few people assume that due to

internet

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people are

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people, are

close to each other.

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hand few

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hand, few

people

thinks

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think

due to

internet

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people are becoming so isolated.In

this

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essay we will

disscus

to consider or examine in speech or writing

discuss

discusses

positive and negative effects of

internet

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on the people.How to use it in a better way. Due to

new teconology

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the new technology, internet

the new technology internet

new technology internet

internet

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helps people to get close.

people

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People

who

is working

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are working

have worked

abroad and

studing

reading carefully with intent to remember

studying

standing

out of their countries can easily talk with their family members and friends

for instance

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, in

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the U

their

in or at that place

there

lot

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lots

internet

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club where students use

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internet

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the internet

and

engage in

make

vedio

the visible part of a television transmission

video

calls to their family.And due to social media people can easily talk

with

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their friends and family members who lives abroad.

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people are so busy

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with

their social media they

are nt giving

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are not given

are not giving

time

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to people around.

they

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They

have

lot

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lots

friend

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friends

on social

media but

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media, but

dont

do not

don't

have a single friend

to spend

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spend

time

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with.

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this

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way they

a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters

are

isolated with their own family and friend.

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for

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For

instance in

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instance, in

italy

a republic in southern Europe on the Italian Peninsula; was the core of the Roman Republic and the Roman Empire between the 4th century BC and the 5th century AD

Italy

a lot of people are taking

antidepressed

any of a class of drugs used to treat depression; often have undesirable side effects

antidepressant

medicine

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medications

due to isolation. In my opinion

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we should use

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internet

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the internet

wisely.We should fix the

time

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net

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the net

.And try to spend more

time

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with friends and family.

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should keep

balance

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a balance

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

204 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

facilitated
connection
geographical barriers
social media platforms
sense of belonging
diverse perspectives
collaborate
share knowledge
excessive use
social isolation
face-to-face interaction
addicted
disconnection
physical surroundings
cyberbullying
online harassment
withdraw
false sense of connection
superficial relationships
polarization
echo chambers
balance
benefits
drawbacks
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Some people think that the inteernet has brought people closer togethert while others that people and communities are bbecome more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

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