people have less time to prepare food, which has given a boost to availability of convenience foods at stores.

In
this
modern age, people have less
time
to prepare
food
, which has given a boost to availability of
convenience
foods at stores.
Such
tendency certainly saves
time but
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time, but
not without some drawbacks.
This
essay will discuss how these disadvantages outweigh the advantage of store-bought
food
.
To begin
with, these easy
cook
meals have more shelf life than regular home cooked
food
which is achieved only by adding unhealthy additives to
food
items.
Although
, these chemicals are not added in large amounts or approved by the government
,
Accept space
,
daily consumption of
such
meals can increase the risk of getting diseases.
For instance
, in my country, India, Maggie one of the favourite ready to
cook
foods was famous popular as it took only 2 minutes to
cook
. But later it was found that the country’s favourite snack contained lead, which is hazardous to health.
In addition
to the above drawback we can
also
see the changes in
food
consumption trend. When people find an easy way to
cook
they buy more and more
convenience
food
instead
of making any effort in cooking at home.
For example
, frozen pizza has become the most treasured
food
items in the USA, as these can be stored for months together. Because of
this
unhealthy habit people are becoming obese and victims of heart diseases. In contradiction to the disadvantages,
convenience
food
can be very helpful when there is no
time
to
cook
or proper kitchen
.
Accept space
.
So, anyone can rely upon them to save some
time
and effort if they are not relied upon daily. In conclusion,
convenience
food
causes more problems than benefits. In my opinion, these disadvantages outweigh the advantages because other than saving
time
there is nothing good or healthy about these products.
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