The chart below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of Japanese tourist market.

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of tourists travelling changed in Japan over the

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1985 to 1995.The line graph represented

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the contribution

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of Australian tourists in

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the Japanese

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tourist market in the percentage term.

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the bar chart, there was a significant rise from about 5

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to 11

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in the first five years of the

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. After that, the trend showed a moderate decline to just over 10

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in a year.

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rest of the

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, the

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of travellers held an upward trend and reach its peak of over 15

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in 1995. Turning to the line graph, the

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of people who came from Australia as a tourist increased

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from 2

% to 4% till 1988. There was growth again to over 6% between 1989 and 1993 after a slight decline

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1988 to 1989.

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of the

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, the percentage

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6%.

Overall

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, the

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of travellers from abroad increased in Japan during the

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. There was a corresponding rise in

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the contribution

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of Australians.