You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one of his objects. Write a letter and explain: - How you enjoyed staying with your friend. - Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how the mistake happened. - Mention how you plan to return the object. Write at least 150 words. Model Answer

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Dear Juhi, Hello. I hope

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letter finds you well.

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is to actually apologize as by mistake I Carried your iPod with me. Thank you so much for a wonderful weekend. I really enjoyed those two days I Spent in your house, spending quality time with you. As you know, I live in a large city where I don’t have many close friends like you

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, I really needed a short break like

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and needless to say you are an amazing host. The reason I mistook your

I-pad

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is mine is the same as yours so

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packing in a hurry I accidently put your device in my bag. I realized my mistake only when I switched on the device after reaching home. But don’t worry. I am sending it back to you

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afternoon by a postal service which delivers

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objects and you will be receiving it by tomorrow noon. The receipt number that you will need to provide is A888. Once again, I am really sorry for the inconvenience. Hope to see you soon. Best regards, Veni.

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

182 words

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