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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers are leaving their poor countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?

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The world has become globalized and in
this
 new era, where boundaries have become blurred it is often seen that people in search of better opportunities are shifting their base to developed countries.
This
 shift, especially
of
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for
 professionals
such
 as teachers and doctors is having an adverse effect on the economies of poor countries.
The biggest problem because
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Because the biggest problem
 of the brain drain is that there is a shortage of skilled workers in a
country
, often
effecting
arousing affect
affecting
 the industries and other sectors.
For instance
, if the most effective doctors of a
country
 leave the
country
 for better opportunities in abroad, it is obvious that the
country
 is more likely to face
shortage
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a shortage
 of good doctors and its public health services will
falling
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fall
 behind. One way of solving the problem is by giving the highly skilled workers more salary or incentives to make them feel different from others.
This
 will
also
 develop an environment where the more talented will feel they are respected in the
country
. Another issue rising because of brain drain is that it increases dependence on foreign technical assistance.
Since the
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Since, the
 talented individuals are turning towards
developed
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developing
 countries, often the
country
 lags behind in technical areas and has to spend money asking for assistance from the developed countries. One solution of it could be that the
country
 should limit the number of years a person can work in a foreign
country
.
This
 will help the people to earn money and the
country
 will still have hope of getting
back the worker
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back to the worker
. Overall, the immigration of highly talented people from a poor
country
 is a setback for the
country
.
However
, if proper steps are
taken it
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taken, it
 can surely be avoided.
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