Some believe in enrolling their children into the best schools so that they learn to socialize while others believe that home-schooling is a better option. Discuss both views and where do you stand on this topic?

Home is the
first
school
and mother will be the
first
teacher for
majority
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the majority
a majority
of individuals. Parents are struggling
to chose
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to choose
best
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the best
school
for their
child
amidst of gobs of institutions. Some believe that getting admitted to famous academy is half done where they will learn more than that they will learn at home. Personally, I think a
child
has a lot to learn, in aspect of moral values and education worth, from both the places.
To begin
with, one of the most common questions
home-
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homeschool
school
graduates and
home-schooled
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homeschooled
children face is that of socialization.
For instance
, an article published by Stetson University indicates that, the instilling parents expect their kids to respect and get along with people of diverse backgrounds, provide their lad with a variety of social opportunities outside the family.
Moreover
, self-educated youngsters are not subjected to the peer pressure, violence, drugs, and other negative influences that are all too common in today's institutes. Self- teaching, once considered a fringe movement, is now widely seen as “an acceptable alternative to conventional schooling”.
On the other hand
, despite
this
popular acceptance, self-taught remains controversial.
First
of all, parents know their children well, they know their needs and capacity,
thus
there will be some influence of parents in every exercise which a
child
practice.
Furthermore
, in universities, they are getting exposed to an entirely different or a new atmosphere filled with almost unknown people of diversified backgrounds. They will get opportunities to explore themselves.
However
, there are many limitations in the home-schooling
such
as interaction with same aged of different culture. Face-to-face interactions can increase the self-esteem, which can be acquired from going to academies. To conclude,
home-schooled
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homeschooled
youths may be more likely to act unselfishly than those who are attending traditional schools. It is purely the choice of
care taker
a custodian who is hired to take care of something (property or a person)
caretaker
, whether they should or shouldn’t send their
off springs
the immediate descendants of a person
offsprings
to
school
depending on their ability to teach and take care of descendants. In my point of view, the
child
has to be sent to
school despite of
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school despite
the fact that he is learning at home.

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