7. Many people believe that modern inventions have brought more problems than the benefits. Do you agree or disagree?
There are different views regarding inventions.
Majority
of people Suggestion
The majority
believes
that current inventions have more disadvantages than its advantages. I Suggestion
believe
completly
disagree with to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
this
suggestion.
To begin
with, the problems of modern inventions. One of the issue is that it increases pollution in the atmosphere. In other words
, the invention, such
as vehicle, produces carbon emission which is dangerous for the environment. For example
, in India, the summar
temperature has been the warmest season of the year; in the northern hemisphere it extends from the summer solstice to the autumnal equinox
summer
rised
from 30 degree to 45 located or moved above the surround or above the normal position
raised
degree which
is a huge change in recent years due to the carbon dioxide from the vehicles. Another cause of Suggestion
degrees, which
degrees which
new invention
is lowering logical thinking in human. To clarify Suggestion
the new invention
this
, the new equipment and software, such
as calculator, computer and mobile phone’s application, reduce burden on human mind
. Suggestion
the human mind
That is
why people do not need to perform calculation task
by Suggestion
a calculation task
the calculation task
calculation tasks
themself which
reduce Accept comma addition
themselves, which
themselves which
human capacity
of own thinking.
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the human capacity
However
, there are a number of benefits from the lattest
inventions which increase up to the immediate present; most recent or most up-to-date
latest
it’s
importance in one’s life. of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
Firstly
, the airplane
, the best creation of humankind, helps to reduce the traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
time
from one country to another country. Before this
invention, it was taking several months for humans to travel to
a long Suggestion
for
distance but
now, they can reach in just 48 hours in any area of the world with the facility of international flight. Accept comma addition
distance, but
Secondly
, it saves time
in the regular work of calculation
and increase the productivity. What is more, people can take quick action based on the output of the calculation
and reach to the solution in the less
Suggestion
the least time
time
. For instance
, calculation
used in the space inventions which is not possible without the latest equipment. Finally
, tha
gadget, definite article
the
such
as telephone, reduces the communication time which
was so high in previous Accept comma addition
time, which
time
when people were sending post to communicate with their relative. Thus
, it increase
internal bonding between the family member event they are living at long distance.
In conclusion, whereas there are several problems with new inventions, Suggestion
increases
such
as environmental damage and lowering human’s critical thinking, it can not
be denied that benefits, can not
cannot
such
as less traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
time
, communication time
and calculation
time
are crucial in human lives thesedays
. Suggestion
these days
Hence
, I believe the new inventions have more positive sides than negative sides.Submitted by Ishaan433 on
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