Many people believe that modern inventions have brought more problems than the benefits. Do you agree or disagree?

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There are different views regarding inventions. The majority of people
believes
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believe
that current inventions have more disadvantages than its advantages. I
completly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
disagree with
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suggestion.
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with, the problems of modern inventions. One of the issue is that it increases pollution in the atmosphere.
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, the invention,
such
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as vehicle, produces carbon emission which is dangerous for the environment.
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, in India, the
summar
the warmest season of the year; in the northern hemisphere it extends from the summer solstice to the autumnal equinox
summer
temperature has been
rised
located or moved above the surround or above the normal position
raised
from 30 degree to 45
degree which
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degrees, which
degrees which
is a huge change in the recent years due to the carbon dioxide from vehicles. Another cause of
new invention
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the new invention
is decreasing the logical thinking in human. To clarify
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, the new equipment and software,
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as calculator, computer and mobile phone’s application, reduce burden on
human’s mind
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the human’s mind
.
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why people do not need to perform
calculation
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tasks by themselves
which eventually
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which, eventually
, reduces human’s capacity of own thinking.
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, there are a number of benefits from the latest inventions which increase
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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
importance in one’s life.
Firstly
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, the
airplane
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, the best creation of humankind, helps to reduce
traveling
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travel
travelling
time
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from one country to another country. Before
this
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invention, it was taking several months for humans to travel
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for
a long
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distance, but
now, they can reach in 48 hours in any area of the world with the facility of international flight.
Secondly
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, it saves
time
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in
regular work
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the regular work
of
calculation
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and increase the productivity. What is more, people can take quick action based on the output of the
calculation
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and reach to the solution in the least
time
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.
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,
calculation
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used in the space analysis is not possible without the latest equipment.
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,
tha
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the
gadget,
such
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as telephone, reduces the communication
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time which
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time, which
was so high in previous
time
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when people had to send post to communicate with their relative.
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, it increases internal bonding between the family member even they are living at a long distance. In conclusion, whereas there are several problems with the new inventions,
such
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as environmental damage and lowering human’s critical thinking, it
can not
can not
cannot
be denied that benefits,
such
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as less
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
time
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, communication
time
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and
calculation
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time
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are most crucial part in human lives these days.
Hence
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, I believe that the new inventions have more positive sides than
it’s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
negative sides.

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