Many people believe that modern inventions have brought more problems than the benefits. Do you agree or disagree?

There are different views regarding inventions. The majority of people

believes

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believe

that current inventions have more disadvantages than its advantages. I

completly

to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent

completely

disagree with

this

suggestion.

To begin

with, the problems of modern inventions. One of the issue is that it increases pollution in the atmosphere.

In other words

, the invention,

such

as vehicle, produces carbon emission which is dangerous for the environment.

For example

, in India, the

summar

the warmest season of the year; in the northern hemisphere it extends from the summer solstice to the autumnal equinox

summer

temperature has been

rised

located or moved above the surround or above the normal position

raised

from 30 degree to 45

degree which

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degrees, which

degrees which

is a huge change in the recent years due to the carbon dioxide from vehicles. Another cause of

new invention

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the new invention

is decreasing the logical thinking in human. To clarify

this

, the new equipment and software,

such

as calculator, computer and mobile phone’s application, reduce burden on

human’s mind

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the human’s mind

.

That is

why people do not need to perform

calculation

tasks by themselves

which eventually

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which, eventually

, reduces human’s capacity of own thinking.

However

, there are a number of benefits from the latest inventions which increase

it’s

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

importance in one’s life.

Firstly

, the

airplane

, the best creation of humankind, helps to reduce

traveling

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travel

travelling

time

from one country to another country. Before

this

invention, it was taking several months for humans to travel

to

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for

a long

distance but

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distance, but

now, they can reach in 48 hours in any area of the world with the facility of international flight.

Secondly

, it saves

time

in

regular work

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the regular work

of

calculation

and increase the productivity. What is more, people can take quick action based on the output of the

calculation

and reach to the solution in the least

time

.

For instance

,

calculation

used in the space analysis is not possible without the latest equipment.

Finally

,

tha

definite article

the

gadget,

such

as telephone, reduces the communication

time which

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time, which

was so high in previous

time

when people had to send post to communicate with their relative.

Thus

, it increases internal bonding between the family member even they are living at a long distance. In conclusion, whereas there are several problems with the new inventions,

such

as environmental damage and lowering human’s critical thinking, it

can not

can not

cannot

be denied that benefits,

such

as less

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

time

, communication

time

and

calculation

time

are most crucial part in human lives these days.

Hence

, I believe that the new inventions have more positive sides than

it’s

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

negative sides.