Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be shut down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

Some people say zoos are the place where wildlife animals can be protected and take care properly, while others argue that locking up animals’ freedom in zoos are morally wrong.
This
essay will be discussed both sides of
this
issue, and
then
will give my own opinions on the matter. On the one hand, there are some reasons that people think the
zoo
is inhumane.
To begin
with, the
zoo
has limited the freedom of animals by imprisoning them
instead
of letting them travel freely in the forest and
then
living their natural life.
Moreover
, the animals are not treated properly at the
zoo
.
For example
, some animals-training at the
zoo
is difficult to entertain just because they take money cut of them.
Then
,
this
can lead to stress and serious illness to animals, which cause reduce of their lifespan. The
zoo
is the solution proposed by some above reasons.
On the other hand
, the
zoo
is meant to protect the wildlife species to save the future generations of those animals.
Initially
, some countries’ zoos are unprofitable to do a wildlife rescue plan that sending many groups across the forest to look for endangered species and take them to the
zoo
to provide the appropriate nourishment. If the
zoo
is closed, the animals in the red list would be dead.
Furthermore
, the
zoo
is
also
an education place where students are able to come here to research for their project and does not dangerous because of better security at the
zoo
. To sum up, some zoos have their own positive impacts on the animal species, personally, I think they need to improve the better protection and food for animals so that will not more harm than good.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • animal welfare
  • conservation
  • captive breeding
  • habitat
  • ethical issues
  • zoochosis
  • endangered species
  • genetic diversity
  • reintroduction programs
  • wildlife education
  • sanctuary
  • natural living conditions
  • artificial environments
  • behavioral enrichment
  • ecosystem
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