The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.

The graphs illustrate the estimation of

jeans

sales

of

Mango

and

Jack&Jones

in Turkey and the prediction for their market share

at the end

of

next

year.

Overall

,

it is clear that

sales

of

jeans

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these brands are forecasted to witness an upward trend in the following year and

Jack&Jones

is projected to constitute more proportion of the market.

According to

the bar chart, Jack&Jone is predicted to sell 450,000 pairs of

jeans

in January, which is three times as much as

Mango

’s data. The figures for these brands are estimated to rise steadily until June, despite a marginal dip in February. The

jeans

sales

of

Mango

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forecasted to experience a spectacular increase and reach 500,000

sales

in August

while

the figure for

Jack&Jones

is predicted to decrease to 400,000 pairs.

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growth in the number of

jeans

sales

is expected during the

last

quarter, with the figure for Jack & Jone reaching a peak at 900,000 and that for

Mango

rising to 600,000 pairs.

At the end

of

next

year,

Jack&Jones

and

Mango

are estimated to

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50% of the market share, with the figure for each being at 30% and 20% respectively.