The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.

The graphs illustrate the estimation of

jeans

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sales

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of

Mango

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and

Jack&Jones

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in Turkey and the prediction for their market share

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of

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year.

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it is clear that

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of

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these brands are forecasted to witness an upward trend in the following year and

Jack&Jones

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is projected to constitute more proportion of the market.

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the bar chart, Jack&Jone is predicted to sell 450,000 pairs of

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in January, which is three times as much as

Mango

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’s data. The figures for these brands are estimated to rise steadily until June, despite a marginal dip in February. The

jeans

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of

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forecasted to experience a spectacular increase and reach 500,000

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in August

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the figure for

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is predicted to decrease to 400,000 pairs.

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growth in the number of

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sales

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is expected during the

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quarter, with the figure for Jack & Jone reaching a peak at 900,000 and that for

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rising to 600,000 pairs.

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of

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year,

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and

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are estimated to

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50% of the market share, with the figure for each being at 30% and 20% respectively.