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In the past, the main role of teachers was providing information. Today with various sources of information available to students, teachers have no role in modern education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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At the current time of technological advancement; one of the most pressing concerns regarding the given topic asserts that whether it is true that teachers of the past were more likely to give science to their students as compared teachers of present time due to the advancement in the sources of material? I completely disagree with
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 with, in the past era, there were not many sources of instruction available to students so the lecturer was the only way for them for seeking advice regarding any topic.
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, it does not mean that now, in the modern period; due to the availability of gadgets, modern teacher has no role in the development of the pupil.
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, even a graduate can acquire knowledge from the internet,
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, he would not be able to understanding properly the practical operations of that report without the aid of an assistant. Apart from that, Modern teachers are well-educated and hired a well desirable and respectful place in
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, modern teachers not only polish the mind of the graduate by digital method, but
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 let them understand the social and moral values.
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, the modern study is so complex and harder than past, so professor plays a great role in understanding the scholar each and every aspect of their studies, tinting, how can it be said that modern scholar has no role to play in the education? In conclusion, I tend to believe that a supervisor is like a lamp who always show the path of the students and brighten up the way of their destination. Whatever the source of knowledge is, without the guidance of teacher, nobody can be success in his life
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