The chart below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 to 2000 and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two bar charts give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 to 2000
as well as
their
marital status of adult Change the word
the
Americans
in two of the years.
Overall
, the number of Americans
married over the 4 years was higher than the number of USA separated.The ratio of marriage between adults in America was much higher than any other marital status in the USA.
In 1970 and 1980, the number of Americans
married was 2.5 million.The rate declined to about 2.5 and 2 million in
1990 to 2000 respectively.The rate Change preposition
from
divorces
, change over the 4 periods.The highest estimate of separation was in 1980, Change preposition
of divorces
while
the lowest rate of divorce was in 1970.
The percent
of marital ground between adult Replace the word
percentage
Americans
was risen
Change to the active voice
rose
in
1970 to 2000, it was 70% and approximately 59% respectively.The proportion of adults in 2000 was higher than that in 1970 by around 10%.Change preposition
from
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