Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Only a
few wastes
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few, wastes
from homes get recycled and it dragged to severe environmental problems. Many people are arguing that there needs to be
legal requirement
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a legal requirement
legal requirements
from
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for
governments to make
this
problem solved. In
this
essay, I will discuss the suitable laws for each
situations
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situation
that different countries facing. There are countries which are having
better amount
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a better amount
of recycling wastes than others.
For example
, in Korea, most of the garbages from home divided in the apartment recycling place
to
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in
plastic, glass, paper, can etc.
However
, there is
also
a little problem
such
as the vinyls or papers don't took from the pets or glasses. To solve
this
problem, the government is trying to fine the people who waste those recyclable garbages without completely making it recyclable. In my opinion, these kinds of countries who
are qualified more
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are more qualified
than other countries but have a little
problems
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problem
could just warn the people for 2 or 3 times
first
and
then
give a suitable punishment.
On the other hand
, there
also
countries which are completely lost in
recycling
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the recycling
. Even some of the country like Ireland doesn't
seperate
act as a barrier between; stand between
separate
any of the recyclable waste but only food rubbish. For those countries the law should be stronger than the countries I mentioned before. They should direct the people by installing CCTV in recycling site and fine all the people who are not following the rules. By doing so, make people sort of afraid of the laws and when it stabilized, they can adjust the strength of the law. To sum up, wastes which are not completely recycled have caused us some problems. Yet not all the nations have the same condition on ruling people about recycling.
Therefore
, different range of laws
have
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has
to be applied. If so, there would be much more waste that recycled perfectly.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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